这个文章我和孩子一起写的,XES老师评价体现家庭爱少了.但我觉得这才是我们家庭爱的形式,是真实的.孩子讲自己熟悉的事情,心里舒服,万一老师提问他也能应答.结果我的看法完全正确. 给以后考五星的同学一点提示.

Good afternoon, ladies and gentlemen, I’m honored to take this contest, I would like to tell you something about me. I am Jason, a pupil of  ten years old  from******School.

As you can see, I’m not only handsome but also independent. I can  do my own thing by myself.

From Grade 2, I go home by myself. I do homework by myself , and I learn English by myself, too.  Sometimes I do housework, such as cleaning and  cooking. My parents are very busy,  But I  have a warm family. On Sundays,  they  play with me together. We always go to parks. In holidays ,we always go traveling . I  love my family very much.

 Now I tell you my story on December 6. That day was very cold. In order to catch school bus,I didn’t go to toilet .On the bus, I felt very very unwell.  Getting off school bus, Facing the cold wind, i rush to my home with my heavy schoolbag. In front of  the door, I was so shivering with cold that I couldn’t find the house key rightly . And so I couldn’t control myself,  I pee-pee on my trousers. When my mum came back, I had changed my trousers and washed the wet ones.  My mum was sorry for this thing . But I said :” That’s  OK,  don’t worry about me.”

This is me. An independent and tough boy!

Thank you for your time!