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发表于 2025-1-10 15:46 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式 来自: 中国江苏苏州
A1. 如果段首句能概括本段的意思,就直接改写段首句(此时的段首句是***题句)
2017年6月摘要节选
The decline of rote learning has been quickened by technology.No one needs to memorize friends’ phone numbers or email a***resses because such data is conveniently stored and accessible electronically. And why remember when and where World War Two broke out when you can find the answer on the internet in about 6 seconds?
段首句之后的两个句子都是紧扣段首句的例证,可以直接改写主题句,而不用把例子写进摘要
改写1:Technology has made rote-learning less needed.
改写2:Rote-learning has become less necessary due to technology.

Learning by Rote in the Digital Age
Rote learning has become seen as an outdated method of teaching. The dictionary defines learning `by rote` as `from memory`, without thought of the meaning; in a mechanical way.
The decline of rote learning has been quickened by technology. No one needs to memorize friends` phone numbers or email a***resses because such data is conveniently stored and accessible electronically. And why remember when and where World War II broke out when you can find the answer on the internet in about six seconds? But now there are voices for a need to return to rote learning.
In fact, memorizing key data is essential to learning any skill. Doctoring requires knowledge of medicine and lawyering requires knowledge of cases and laws. Of course, being able to recall things will not further your understanding of those things, but without memorizing these foundation elements, you cannot progress to a deeper understanding of a subject.
While the internet and computers have weakened the need for us to remember things, it may well be that mobile learning can help bring this style of learning back to life by making it more convenient and more fun.
Drilling yourself—with flashcards or by repetition—is usually hard and boring work, which is why most people need their multiplication tables to be drilled into them by teachers or parents. Rote learning without a willing third party can be battle of discipline and motivation. But mobile learning can make those flashcards and drills more appropriate to individual study; our digital devices can challenge and inform us at the same time and also keep us motivated, whether through game-like structures or recording our progress.
Once you`ve acquired the essentials of a subject by rote learning, you will find it easier to go deeper in the application of knowledge which is important.





2023年1月摘要节选
One of the joys of fiction is that it can take us to places that our lives won’t. It can transport us to 17th century France, or to war-torn Germany. It can take us to a future world in which artificial intelligence takes over and books are banned, or a fantasy world where people battle it out for food.
同上,段首句之后的两个句子都是紧扣段首句的例证
改写:Fiction-reading is joyful in that we can be transported to places inaccessible in life.

2023.01
春**原文
For many people, nothing is more enjoyable than spending a whole afternoon reading a good novel. But are novels simply a pleasant way to pass the time, or could it be true that reading fiction actually benefits our lives?

One of the joys of fiction is that it can take us to places that our lives won’t. It can transport us to 17th century France, or to war-torn Germany. It can take us to a future world in which artificial intelligence takes over and books are banned, or a fantasy world where people battle it out for food.

Fiction can also introduce us to a whole range of people that we haven’t yet met. And this, according to Carrie Oates, a novelist and academic, is perhaps the real benefit of stories. In one of her studies, participants were asked to read either a short story by Chekhov, or a version of the story in documentary form. Those who were given the fictionalized version were found to be more likely to sympathize with the characters thus going through greater changes in personality.

In another study, she showed participates photos of eyes of people who were feeling and thinking different things. The people who read fiction were better able to interpret those thoughts and minds of the characters. We think about why, they behave in a certain way, and what they are likely to do next. Just as we might become more knowledgeable about psychology and astronomy if we read about psychology and astronomy, we get better at this kind of social thinking if we read fiction. This improves our understanding of the thoughts and feelings of those around us in real life.

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