小一上写的33篇英语作文
本帖最后由 VivianAn 于 2019-1-28 01:12 编辑快放假了，下周最后一周上课（我们放假真是.....晚啊，天哪受不了）记录保存...
其实我发现好像还有几篇找不到...能找到的赶紧留个底，为了之后比较。
学校里也写了一本nonfiction小书和一篇story，nonfiction送给同学了，story好像还没完（下周还有一周上学），不算在内。但写作成绩并不算好，nonfiction只得了D+，上头还有两档是M和M+。
十一前好像就写了一篇（找不到了），33篇都是十一之后写的。算起来每周2篇呀
倒序排列一下，毕竟最近写的感觉还是成熟些。和刚开始写的，感觉还是进步的挺多。
作为男生总是粗糙些，而我相对有更鼓励他用一些好词，长句子，和完整的意思，所以每次各种错误也真的是很多。希望下学期能得到改善。
1. movie review 2019/1/27
（from Guided Writing unit 12）
写作要求
Write a letter to your friend about the movie you watched recently. Write more than 100 words.
144词。不算我最后给他补得三句。
完成时间不明，白天自己写的我不在家。
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2. travel suggestions 2019/1/26
（from Guided Writing unit 10）
写作要求
Write a letter to your friend about a place she/he can go.
131词。
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3. Ice Age 2019/1/25
要求
Write 5 sentences about the Ice Age. Be careful that don't use run on sentences.
113词
IceAgeDoyou know about the ice age (Ice Age)?It was when a climate change caused the planet to cool so animals had to adapt with it. For example, smilodon (Smilodon) had to adapt tougher teeth to catch large prey. Another one was the wooly mammoth that had to adapt to the weather by growing thick hair to protect it from the cold. Why did the animals die out? Some scientists think that people killed too many of them, but other scientists think that a sudden climate change made them die. There was also an ice age (Ice Age) called little ice age that caused large famines across the land because the crops were ruined by the ice.
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4. wonders 作业 1月
要求
Write about a wild animal and its habtat.
154词
SnakesDo you know about snakes? Where do different snakes live? People often think that snakes all live in forests. However, not all snakes live in forests. Some snakes live in the desert, and others live in the warm parts of the sea. They also hide themselves. This is called camouflage.There are many kinds of snakes, such as cobras and anacondas. These snakes are dangerous, so don’t go too near. All snakes are reptiles, animals that are cold blooded. Many snakes are venomous. These snakes inject venom into their prey and kill them.Do you know that a snake can eat something larger than its head? And a king cobra eats other snakes! Boas are huge snakes that make its prey stop breathing by wrapping around it. Do you know that the anaconda is the world’s heaviest snake? Green anacondas are the biggest snake in the world. I think that snakes are great creatures.
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5.2019/1/20
要求
Write about a restaurant you had tried.
（from Guided Writing unit 8）
这篇是白天写好别我一看撕了重新写的。原来写的是龙之梦...除了两句话是9吃饭，其他全在说在龙之梦玩...
6. wonders作业 2019/1/19
Write about a wild animal.
（from Guided Writing unit 7）
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7. wonders 作业
19年1月
要求
Write a paragraph about your special talent
154词
My Special TalentMy talent is running. I am also very fast. At school I am the fastest in two races. The two races are long run and short run which is about 90 meters, and the long run is running our football field 4 times. I won them both because I practiced running all the way around Zhong Shan Park. Zhong Shan Park is about 2 kilometers and need 30 minutes to complete it.To run the football field four times completely need 2 minutes and 18 seconds, and my friend needs 2 minutes and 19 seconds. To finish the short run, I need 9.8 seconds. How do I have such a talent? It is because I liked to run very fast when I was a baby, I drank a lot ofmilk and ate a lot of meat. In addition, before the race my dad had helped me run faster, so I ran that fast.
老师的评语 GreatJob!You did very well describinghow you run so fast and it is clear that you worked very hard to achieve yourgoal.Maybe you could add how you feltabout winning.-Teacher
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8. 精读课作业 1月
要求
Write about an extinct animal.
DinosaursOnce dinosaurs lived on the earth millions of years ago, both on land and in the sea. Why did they die out? There are many reasons. One reasonis an asteroid crashed on the earth (Earth), and the earth (Earth) became very cold, so the plants died and the dinosaurs that ate plants died of hunger. Also the sea level went down, so the dinosaurs that lived in the sea didn’t fit.Let me tell you about some fierce dinosaurs. Rob Sula is a field paleontologist. Once he went to Nebraska that is under a large sea, and Robthought he would find a mosasaur. He did find a mosasaur with a team. There were three types of mosasaurs,. they (They) were Tylosaur,Plalecdrpus, and Clidastes. Clidastes was the smallest in (of) the three kind. There were also many extreme dinosaurs, such as Velociraptors and Masiakasaurus. Masiakasaurus lived 70-65million years ago, and it used its front teeth to stud its prey and also used them as a weapon, because it was very small.Velociraptor was very small too and used its large claws to climb onto other dinosaurs.I think that dinosaurs were terrific on hunting and defending, but they have already died out.
老师评语Wonderful story and your descriptions are excellent. Your writing is really good.Just remember to capitalize your proper nouns. – Teacher
9. 12月
Write about weather
（from Guided Writing）
10. 12月
Write a book review
（from Guided Writing ）
11. 12月
Write about one of your friends.
12. 12月
Write about a party
Dear Pete,
Last weekend I had a Christmas party. It was not as fun as the movie partylast Friday in school. At the party, I played balloons and chess with my classmates. We also ate dinner together. It was a feast, and everything was very wonderful. We also played with clowns after dinner. I won in the game and got a box of blocks.
It made me think of the movie party. We all ate a lot of food, too! I enjoyed eating and playing with everyone. I also enjoyed watching movies. It was exciting and the party was fun.
Good luck,
Peter
13.
Write about a season
Winter
There are plenty of activities to do in winter. My friends and I enjoy skiing. We need gloves, helmets,special boots and skis to do the activity. We also enjoy snowboarding. Instead of ski, we need snowboard, and the boots are different as well.
There are other acitivities to do, too. Many people enjoy sledding down the hill. They need a sled! Other people enjoy snowball fighting. They only need warm clothes to protect them from cold.
Winter is a fun time for everyone.
14. 12月wonders作业
Write about your favorite fruit
My Favorite Fruit
Do you know what my favorite fruit is? It is an apple. It is as round as a ball and as red as a strawberry. It is as juicy as a watermelon and is as crunchy as potato chips. It is as smooth as glass and as sweet as candy. I also like it because it is very good for your health. So I want to eat it every day. What about you?
老师评语
Excellent job! I really enjoy your use of similes in the paragraph to express how much you love apples.Very well written. My favorite fruit is a mango!
Teacher
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15. 12月wonders作业
Write about your favorite soup
My Favorite Soup
My favorite soup is Buddha Jumps over the Wall. It is brown and a bit red because it has some vinegar in it. The soup is flavorful because it has many expensive ingredients in it, which are sharks’ fin, abalone, sea cucumber, scallops and Jin Hua Ham. It feels silky and is so appetizing that you want to eat it.
Do you know where this strange name came from? I am going to tell you. A scholar had a very sumptuous soup. When the Buddha smelled it, it made his mouth water. So he wanted to see what it was and he jumped over the wall. I think it is a flavorful soup.
I like it so much that I can eat two bowls of rice when I eat it.
老师评语
Great job Peter!You used a wide variety of words and chose excellent adjectives to describe the soup. Reading your words made me hungry!Make sure you use a dictionary when writing so that you can spell new and difficult words correctly.
Teacher
P.S. My favorite soup is French onion soup!
16. 12月Titanic 精读课作业
要求
Have you read any other books that were about real events? In 100 words or less, tell me about that book. If you haven’t read one, what other subjects would you enjoy reading about?
The Hindenburg Disaster
The Hindenburg’s final voyage, from Germany to New York, was a tragedy. At 7:25, on May 3, 1937, it started to burn and crashed when it’s landing on the airfield. 33 people perished and 64 were saved. The captain stayed on the Hindenburg and got out at last after it hit the ground. Then the captain went back to help save passengers.
The Hindenburg, which was 804 feet long and 135 feet tall, was the biggest object that ever flew. It was a Zeppelin or airship that used hydrogen to fly. It was made of fabric, so it didn’t bend.
On the back of the Hindenburg, two crew members saw a cell exploded and the fire started to spread out to the front of the Hindenburg. It was falling quickly down to the ground. People were jumping off the Hindenburg when it was too high up in the air, so they died. The people that didn’t die were crushed when the wreck fell on top of them. The Hindenburg, the biggest object that ever flew, was destroyed.
Why did such a tragedy happen? It happened because when it was turning a sharp turn, a wire broke and there was a spark which caused the fire to spread.
After that day, no passenger airship ever flew again.
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17. 12月titanic 精读课作业
要求 Wewrote a headline for the Titanic disaster. Now can you write a short version ofwhat happened to be put in the newspaper with your headline? Try to use around100 words.
Titanic Disaster, only 711 savedThe Titanic’s maiden voyage, from England to New York,across the Atlantic Ocean was a tragedy. It hit the iceberg at 11:40pm, April15, 1912 and sank at 2:20am, April 15, 1912,. 1,517 people perished and 711 saved by the Carpathia,. Ismay was found, and Captain Smith perished.At 11:40 pm, when the two lookouts saw the iceberg, the ship turned but itwas too late. The side of the hull hit the icebergand the rivets,which hold the steel plates together, popped out and water rushed in. It flooded in six compartments. The bow started sinking and the stern started to rise. At 12:15 am, Titanic sent the SOS signal to Carpathia andstarted lowering lifeboats. After twentylifeboats were lowered, the Titanic snapped into two pieces and sank. Why did the ship sink?There were many reasons. First was the weather.It was too calm with no waves splashing against the iceberg, so they could not see it. Anotherreason is that the lookouts couldn’t find theirbinoculars, so theysaw the iceberg when it was too late. The third reason is that the radiooperator didn’t listen to the ice warning, so they didn’t slow down. The most important oneis that the ship didn’t have enough lifeboats for everyone, so many people diedduring the disaster.
18. 11月Titanic 精读课作业
要求
Homework:
Give two examples from the book that show the time is 1912 and not present day.
There are two evidences that show the time is 1912 and not present day.
First reason is that the biggest ship now in the world is the Prelude FLING, which is 488 meters long, and its maiden voyage was in December 2013 from Korea, not the RMS Titanic which is 269.1 meters long. From this we know it was 1912.
Another reason it that Titanic burnt coal to boil water into steam, then it powered the ship. But now we use electricity to power a ship. So it happened in 1912.
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19. 11月Titanic精读课作业要求:In a paragraph or two, answer the following: Imagine that an extremely luxurious means oftransportation - perhaps the world’s fastest airplane - was being launchedtoday. Who might want to have tickets on its first journey?
20. vipkid L6U1作业
Write about a wild animal' adaptation.
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21.
写一篇说明
89词。这篇写的非常痛苦，折腾很久
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22. vipkid L5U12
Write about a place you have been to.
171词
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23 vipkid L5
Write about how sun helps us.
170词
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24. vipkid L5
a place you have been
107词
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25. 对比和对照
写两种动物
101词大约20分钟写完
26 shark系列故事之三
万圣节前
27. shark 系列故事之二
草草写完玩去了，没改
28. shark系列故事之一
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29. 自然灾害对比
这个时候还需要把自己想的录一句写一句
119词
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30. 鲨鱼
主题写作。
看完书后，录一句写一句。此阶段连录带写大约记得要写2小时
181词
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31. 旅途中的日记
85词
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32. 说服类
玩游戏
92词
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33. VIPkid的作业
写林肯。
85词
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33. VIPkid的作业
写林肯。
85词
求教一下lz孩子学习动力、兴趣、积极性的培养
这是一年级的娃吗？也太厉害了吧 樱花树下 发表于 2019-1-28 12:25 static/image/common/back.gif
求教一下lz孩子学习动力、兴趣、积极性的培养
没啥培养....现在还小还骗的进，还不敢反抗....趁这会多塞点...
关于写作，对于他喜欢的题材还是有一定的积极性，比如写故事，比如写灾难，比如写他喜欢的动物动物。而有些不喜欢的话题那就....
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