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热度 7已有 996 次阅读2021-4-15 13:16 |系统分类:小学教育

偶然在朋友圈看到同事贴的一个我司内部(应该是美国总部)发的写作须知:
1,每句话不要使用超过30个单词;用简洁的词( due to the fact that -->because, lacked the ability to --> could not)

2,用数据代替形容词:举例 We made the on-timer delivery rate much higher. 
改为We made the on-time delivery rate by 15bps from 97.10% to 97.25%

3,去掉假大空的词语(原文是delete weasel words), 举例 nearly all customers 改为86% of the customers globally;

4, Does your writing pass the "so what " test? (这段就不翻中文了)
If you deleted the paragraph, would the readers miss it? 
How does this enrich the reader's understanding?
What are the implications of your claim?

5、如果被问到一个问题,请直接回答问题。举例:How many job postings are open for your team?
回答:Six postings are open today and I expect three requisitions to be approved by Friday.

这就是真实世界里面对英语写作的要求。





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回复 winifreda 2021-7-22 16:52
不管写啥文章都有这要求啊,不只英文吧

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