求助翻译体验英语一

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My tower  
My tower is going up My tower is going up and up. No!No!Down comes my tower. Here is my big red block.. Here is my big blue block. My tower is going up.  My tower is going up and up and up. My little red block goes here. My little blue block goes here. Look at my big tower.

因为是讲给孩子听，自己翻译很生硬，想让英语好的高人，翻译得生动一些，谢谢
My book  
I am looking for my book. My book is not here. Look! Here is my elephant. I am looking for my book. My book is not up here. Look! Here is my monkey. I am looking for my book. Ohh! My book is not down here. Look! Here is my tigher. Look! Here is my book. Look at me . I can read my book.

  Jack’s birthday
(please turn to page 2) “A car for me ,”said Jack  “A red car. Thank you,mum and dad.” “look,” said Jack.  “My car can go up and down. Here is a garage for my red car.”  said Jack. “My car can go in the garage.” “Mum ,dad,”  said Jack. “look,my car is in the garage.”  Jack said . “My car is not in the garage .” Dad said “I can see the red car .look ,here is the Billy and here is the car.”  “Jack’s red car in the garage.”said Billy.

Bed time  
(please turn to page 2) “Come to bed ,Jack.”said mum. “Look at my red car,mum.”said Jack. “My car can go up and down.”said Jack. “Come on.”said mum.“Come to bed.”  “Look at me,mum.”said Billy,“I am in bed.” “Mum,mum,come here.” said Billy. “Here is my book.”  Mum and Billy are looking at the book. Jack is looking at mum and Billy.  Look at Jack.Jack is going to bed.  Jack and mum and Billy are looking at the book

  Little chimp and big chimp
(please turn to page 3)  Little chimp is going up in the trees. Little chimp is going up and down. Big chimp is asleep in the sun. Little chimp is going up and down.,up and down.  Little chimp is going up to the big tree. Oh! No! Down come the little chimp. Big chimp wakes up.  Big chimp is looking for little chimp. Little chimp is up in the big tree.

Sam’s race  
(please turn to page 3) “Look at sam!” Said mum. Sam is in the race. Sam looked at mum.  Mum looked at Sam.  “Mum,mum,here I come.”shouted Sam. Sam ran and ran.  “Come on ,Sam,”shouted mum,“come on.” “Oh! No!” said mum, “look at Sam.” “Come on ,Sam,” said mum,“come on.” Sam ran to mum ,  “Here I come.”said Sam “Good girl ,Sam” said mum

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  Let’s pretend  
(please turn to page 3)  Look at Emma , Emma is a bear.Emma is happy. Look at Matthew. Matthew is a rabbit. Matthew is not happy. “Grr-grr,I am a bear.”said Emma.“I am a big bear.Grr-grr.” “Mum” said Matthew.“Look at my book,look at the tiger.” “Here is the tiger’s nose.”said mum.“Here is the tiger’s mouse.” “And here is a tail for Matthew the tiger.” said mum.  “grr-grr,I am a tiger.I am a big tiger.Grr-grr.” Look at Matthew and Emma.

Red puppy  
  (please turn to page 3)  The teddy bears are in the basket.The rabbits are in the basket.The dolls are in the basket. Red puppy is in the basket,too. “look! The teddy bears are not in the basket.” “look! The rabbits are not in the basket.” “look! The dolls are not in the basket.” Red puppy is in the basket. Red puppy is not happy.  Here come a little girl.  The little girl is looking at the red puppy. The little girl is happy. Red puppy is happy, too.

Mother bird  
  (please turn to page 3) Mother bird is looking for a worm. Up in the tree,the baby birds are hungry. Mother bird looks and looks for a worm. Here comes a worm. Mother bird sees the worm. Here comes a cat. The cat sees mother bird. Mother bird sees the cat. Up goes mother bird. Up ,up ,up ,goes mother bird. Mother bird goes up to the baby birds in the tree. The worm is for the baby birds.

The lucky dip
   (please turn to page 3)  “Come here ,dad.”shouted Matthew. “look! Here is a lucky dip.” “ A lucky dip!”said Emma.  “Oh!no!”said Matthew “Here is a comb. “Oh!no!”said Emma. “Look at the tooth brush.” Mum said “Here is a little blue car.” Dad said “look at my teddy bear.” “Here you are,mum.”said Matthew. “Here is the comb.”       “Thank you , Matthew.”said mum. “The car is for you .”          “Here you are ,dad.”said Emma.  “The tooth brush is for you.And the teddy bear is for me.”

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表翻译中文。。。。。。要么你用英语讲。

尼可张

不翻译更好。真的要生动的话，你得根据里面的内容弄点积木玩具来表演。

狂奔的油条

可是不翻译的话，孩子怎么听得懂呢？

逗逗1117

狂奔的油条 发表于 2014-8-27 16:23
可是不翻译的话，孩子怎么听得懂呢？

这套书有图片的，不需要翻译，我们当初看的时候就完全么有翻译。如果孩子边看图片边听你讲不行，那就辛苦你边比划边大声讲了。

鱼骨头

多大的孩子？一般来说，根本不需要翻译，孩子都能懂，翻译了反而不好

狂奔的油条

我们已经新一了，因为之前英语没重视，所以现在有点崩溃

admin

不要翻译，最坏打算也是让孩子直接背下来

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狂奔的油条 发表于 2014-8-27 16:23
可是不翻译的话，孩子怎么听得懂呢？

孩子听不懂，说明程度没到，降低程度学习。

用更简单的机灵狗入门更合适。

觅己

不要整段翻译，最多告诉孩子几个关键词是什么意思，多听几遍，对照图片，坚持一段时间孩子理解力会有提高的。